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Welcome to Sacramento

By Ninefingers on March 3, 2024 8:04 pm

This is a song about making my way to Sacramento by way of Bakersfield. I spent some time in the city of oil refining my temperament so that I could then keep on traveling upward and onward to enjoy the city of trees as a healthier and kinder person. The original beat for this was made for me by Connor Helm in Sacramento. The OG version has that sped up choir sound going through the whole thing however he sent me all the stems so I separated those out and pulled most of the melodic elements out of the beat for this, and then kind of placed the different parts of the drum set all around and left it super sparse to just focus on the words. Not sure if I'll continue to move the song in this direction or not when I prep it for real deal recording. Feel free to let me know if you think it's too sparse. This isn't really intended to be a Song song, but rather an introduction to a series of hip hop songs I plan on putting together in Sac with mostly Sac producers and musicians.
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I said that love was only made to burn
But I was burnt I was jaded, didn’t think I could return
To a time and a space, where I could feel love with a straight face
Palm to the face, the aftertaste of the pillow case
I put my misery out of its misery, paralyzed by the
Ninth degree burns of a head and heart injury
That’s no way to live, it’s no way to be
I trapped my sadness in my songs so I could walk away and be free
‘Cause life is beautiful, and I can see that now
The rain leads to rainbows, the heartbreak to new songs
I’d been treading water for 900 days too long
I’d latched on to my old memories and feasted on the carrion
But that’s all over now, today’s a brand new day
I’d like to learn to sing and dance, ballet and broadway
Tell me your stories and sing me your songs
I’ve been working on my harmonies, I’ll try to sing along

I crossed the fields of oil searching for the land of trees
The sun was beating down on me, it drove me to my knees
I was feverish with heat, of 900 degrees
Because when love can’t be expressed it burns you up like a disease
I want to be loved, but more importantly to love
And so I bathed in the two rivers and I made peace with the flood
Now I am learning to commit which has me feeling so enriched
Because the grass is always greener on the side in which you water it
The grass is always greener on the side in which we water it

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“I trapped my sadness in my songs so I could walk away and be free“ - great line. Those lyrics are a journey.

Just saw you on the news

awesome rap and beat! gotta hear more from you! I don't think it's too sparse, it's great to be able to focus on the words while the beat is groovy as hell.

I guess maybe little elements could be developed to make sure there is interesting stuff going on on lines 5-8 of groups of 8....?!??! but the sample in the beginning and break is v nice.

Great message & powerful lyrics as ever! If anything, I hear a longer break after "sing along" and maybe a female r&b vocal riff/sample there or additional instrumental to break up the vocal chunks. But for an intro not song song great as is

hellz ya, you put some nice lyrical swagger to this rhythmic stroll big_smile

Neat, I love the concept and beat! Long live the city of trees

Paisleyfrog wrote:

“I trapped my sadness in my songs so I could walk away and be free“ - great line. Those lyrics are a journey.

Aye thank you I appreciate it. It's supposed to represent my journey from Bakersfield to Sacramento so it sounds like I'm on the right track!

Drum Bender wrote:

Just saw you on the news

Did you see my fancy BEAM nails?!

horatiuromantic wrote:

awesome rap and beat! gotta hear more from you! I don't think it's too sparse, it's great to be able to focus on the words while the beat is groovy as hell.

I guess maybe little elements could be developed to make sure there is interesting stuff going on on lines 5-8 of groups of 8....?!??! but the sample in the beginning and break is v nice.

Thanks for the input! I'm still torn on having the sample in the middle or figuring out if something else should go there. Also trying to figure out what other instruments I want to bring in for little flourishes during the second verse. Haven't settled on anything yet.

fetalface wrote:

Great message & powerful lyrics as ever! If anything, I hear a longer break after "sing along" and maybe a female r&b vocal riff/sample there or additional instrumental to break up the vocal chunks. But for an intro not song song great as is

Yeah I feel what you're saying after that sing along break. I always fear samples and would rather just create something but haven't yet settled on what would be a great fit and who would be good to try something there (the producer that provided the intro sample has assured me we'll never run into legal issues with this one, but I always prefer creating new things when possible).

RajaTheResidentAlien wrote:

hellz ya, you put some nice lyrical swagger to this rhythmic stroll big_smile

Woot! I'm not often accused of swagger so I'll take it!

pineapple_dan wrote:

Neat, I love the concept and beat! Long live the city of trees

ITS TIME TO STORM THE SACRAMENTO WATER TOWER AND TEAR DOWN THAT "Farm to Fork" NONSENSE AND RECLAIM THE CITY OF TREES, or at least maybe change it to CITY OF BEAMS.

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