I think the main thing it could use more of is something that stands out. all the elements in the track seem a bit shy and don't wanna be too loud. and the frequency of things is pretty uniform, so you don't really have time to focus on anything because there's another random thing popping up. I think there are some elements that could be really nice, like the birds, the low pitch synth pad occasionally, but they need more space to be observed and enjoyed. hope this helps! lofi beats is a tricky genre!

I think the main thing it could use more of is something that stands out. all the elements in the track seem a bit shy and don't wanna be too loud. and the frequency of things is pretty uniform, so you don't really have time to focus on anything because there's another random thing popping up. I think there are some elements that could be really nice, like the birds, the low pitch synth pad occasionally, but they need more space to be observed and enjoyed. hope this helps! lofi beats is a tricky genre!