Woahh love the simple, but bold chord progression!!

Woahh love the simple, but bold chord progression!! <3

ooh that bass hits, great job!!

ooh that bass [i]hits[/i], great job!!

Very nice! Your plan sounds good, I think WB is great for practicing and experimenting.

Since you asked, I feel like there's some highs missing in the vocal, they feel a bit "isolated", but might just be me ^^

Very nice! Your plan sounds good, I think WB is great for practicing and experimenting. Since you asked, I feel like there's some highs missing in the vocal, they feel a bit "isolated", but might just be me ^^

this is a lot of fun !

this is a lot of fun !

top notch.  great job

top notch. great job

You right you right, this was recorded through an awful clip-on mic. I debated removing it because I still haven't acquired any decent recording equipment (why haven't I done this yet haha). If I were to redo this track, I'd ask someone else to do the vocal. Thanks for the feedback!

[quote=JerwuQu]Since you asked, I feel like there's some highs missing in the vocal, they feel a bit "isolated", but might just be me ^^[/quote] You right you right, this was recorded through an awful clip-on mic. I debated removing it because I still haven't acquired any decent recording equipment (why haven't I done this yet haha). If I were to redo this track, I'd ask someone else to do the vocal. Thanks for the feedback!

Honestly, I did not think this was for me until halfway through the track. I'm glad I waited. The bass and the chords slap.

Honestly, I did not think this was for me until halfway through the track. I'm glad I waited. The bass and the chords slap.

As far as the production feedback you requested: for my taste, there's too much treble and it's a touch heavy on the compression.

As far as the production feedback you requested: for my taste, there's too much treble and it's a touch heavy on the compression.

Fair, I started the song with the intro choral chords trying to copy something, and only decided to switch up the progression later. And thanks for the kind words!

In hindsight (hindhearing?) I think I agree. I'm always afraid my track will end up too quiet but this was a bit too much. Thank you for the feedback!

[quote=license]Honestly, I did not think this was for me until halfway through the track. I'm glad I waited. The bass and the chords slap.[/quote] Fair, I started the song with the intro choral chords trying to copy something, and only decided to switch up the progression later. And thanks for the kind words! [quote=license]As far as the production feedback you requested: for my taste, there's too much treble and it's a touch heavy on the compression.[/quote] In hindsight (hindhearing?) I think I agree. I'm always afraid my track will end up too quiet but this was a bit too much. Thank you for the feedback!

Ah John this is so good!!! Love the growly bass, has a lot of bite to it. Such a shuffle-y bounce-y tune.

Ah John this is so good!!! Love the growly bass, has a lot of bite to it. Such a shuffle-y bounce-y tune.

Especially nice job with the bass and beat in the second half of the track!  Catchy vocal melody as well. 

Especially nice job with the bass and beat in the second half of the track! Catchy vocal melody as well.

It's a bomb thrower! great beat breaks!

It's a bomb thrower! great beat breaks!

Dope!!

Dope!!

This got some good grooves going.

This got some good grooves going.