the song came out to be a little scary and cinematic. I could imagine a pursuit in the night through an empty town or something like that....not bad.

the song came out to be a little scary and cinematic. I could imagine a pursuit in the night through an empty town or something like that....not bad.

This may be the common beat but it kinda works. What matters is to get a submission and keeping at it. Best of luck for next week!

This may be the common beat but it kinda works. What matters is to get a submission and keeping at it. Best of luck for next week!

It all fits together well enough.

It all fits together well enough.

Enjoyed this, I think it held together. I zoned out with the beat, propulsive. Enjoyed those awesome sounds. Cool guitar, vocal things happening. Putting some ideas together can keep things interesting, I end up doing that a lot.

Enjoyed this, I think it held together. I zoned out with the beat, propulsive. Enjoyed those awesome sounds. Cool guitar, vocal things happening. Putting some ideas together can keep things interesting, I end up doing that a lot.

I enjoyed the bassline progression.  Those low deeper sorta NINish swirls that come in once and awhile add a nice touch too.  I think the beat did a good job of tying things together.  Had you not mentioned "different ideas" I would've thought it all fit nicely   If anything it's montage of melodies to expand upon.  That snare fill is a nice transition part.

I enjoyed the bassline progression. Those low deeper sorta NINish swirls that come in once and awhile add a nice touch too. I think the beat did a good job of tying things together. Had you not mentioned "different ideas" I would've thought it all fit nicely :) If anything it's montage of melodies to expand upon. That snare fill is a nice transition part.