You had me from the first chords on this. Great jangle as per usual, and THAT SOLO. Launched clear into space. VU meters started melting around 3 minutes, love the overdrive.

Oh man. Yeah, you got the big ending. Really, really well done.

I have no problems with a good fade. It's been shown in studies that a fade causes a song to stick in a listener's head after the song is over. And on a song with a big ending like this? Perfect usage

More unsolicited thoughts, but related to your comments

Personally, I love your vocal melodies and don't think they're stale, they fit really well with your songs. But an observation - are you using pitch correction? (If you're not, you have perfect pitch, and I apologize ) But I'd love to hear a vocal line with some more imperfections, out-of-tune-ness included. I love how organic your guitars sound - maybe go for a slightly more organic vocal sound. And definitely...more harmonies!

Great stuff as per usual, love your writing. Another favorite.

You had me from the first chords on this. Great jangle as per usual, and THAT SOLO. Launched clear into space. VU meters started melting around 3 minutes, love the overdrive. Oh man. Yeah, you got the big ending. Really, really well done. I have no problems with a good fade. :) It's been shown in studies that a fade causes a song to stick in a listener's head after the song is over. And on a song with a big ending like this? Perfect usage <3 More unsolicited thoughts, but related to your comments :) Personally, I love your vocal melodies and don't think they're stale, they fit really well with your songs. But an observation - are you using pitch correction? (If you're not, you have perfect pitch, and I apologize :) ) But I'd love to hear a vocal line with some more imperfections, out-of-tune-ness included. I love how organic your guitars sound - maybe go for a slightly more organic vocal sound. And definitely...more harmonies! Great stuff as per usual, love your writing. Another favorite.

Thanks for the nice feedback! Always appreciate the comments and point to improve.

I do use pitch correction most of the time- I try not to make it sound too obvious or over the top, but maybe i did this time and it was a bit too blatant haha! I think as a non-singer, its a bit of a point of insecurity, so I feel that tuning vocals (maybe sometimes too much) is better than a fully natural take - I will push to work on this though!

Thanks again!

[quote=Paisleyfrog]You had me from the first chords on this. Great jangle as per usual, and THAT SOLO. Launched clear into space. VU meters started melting around 3 minutes, love the overdrive. Oh man. Yeah, you got the big ending. Really, really well done. I have no problems with a good fade. :) It's been shown in studies that a fade causes a song to stick in a listener's head after the song is over. And on a song with a big ending like this? Perfect usage <3 More unsolicited thoughts, but related to your comments :) Personally, I love your vocal melodies and don't think they're stale, they fit really well with your songs. But an observation - are you using pitch correction? (If you're not, you have perfect pitch, and I apologize :) ) But I'd love to hear a vocal line with some more imperfections, out-of-tune-ness included. I love how organic your guitars sound - maybe go for a slightly more organic vocal sound. And definitely...more harmonies! Great stuff as per usual, love your writing. Another favorite.[/quote] Thanks for the nice feedback! Always appreciate the comments and point to improve. I do use pitch correction most of the time- I try not to make it sound too obvious or over the top, but maybe i did this time and it was a bit too blatant haha! I think as a non-singer, its a bit of a point of insecurity, so I feel that tuning vocals (maybe sometimes too much) is better than a fully natural take - I will push to work on this though! Thanks again!

I so totally get that! It’s something about how the way we interpret our voices from inside our skulls sounding completely different than what it sounds like to everyone else. Which is why it seems that everyone hates how their voice sounds recorded. It just sounds wrong!

I’ve generally noticed the tuning on your vocals - the obvious pitch correction would sound at home on pop punk, which is why I think it stands out here more. To repeat, not a knock! Your production is great, but I’d love to hear more of your natural voice come through. (And yeah, I get this as well - took me the better part of a decade to start liking my voice without major processing).

I’d also maybe call bullshit on calling yourself a “non singer”. It’s really difficult to get as good of results as you get using pitch correction without good input

Love your work! Can’t wait to see where you go next.

[quote=Jackmsimpson] I do use pitch correction most of the time- I try not to make it sound too obvious or over the top, but maybe i did this time and it was a bit too blatant haha! I think as a non-singer, its a bit of a point of insecurity, so I feel that tuning vocals (maybe sometimes too much) is better than a fully natural take - I will push to work on this though! [/quote] I so totally get that! It’s something about how the way we interpret our voices from inside our skulls sounding completely different than what it sounds like to everyone else. Which is why it seems that everyone hates how their voice sounds recorded. It just sounds wrong! I’ve generally noticed the tuning on your vocals - the obvious pitch correction would sound at home on pop punk, which is why I think it stands out here more. To repeat, not a knock! Your production is great, but I’d love to hear more of your natural voice come through. (And yeah, I get this as well - took me the better part of a decade to start liking my voice without major processing). I’d also maybe call bullshit on calling yourself a “non singer”. It’s really difficult to get as good of results as you get using pitch correction without good input :) Love your work! Can’t wait to see where you go next.

dude you are so stupidly professional not sure what you are doing on this site with us wankers

i love fade outs and anyone who doesn't like them can come over and i will fight them becau.... *voice fading*

dude you are so stupidly professional not sure what you are doing on this site with us wankers ;) i love fade outs and anyone who doesn't like them can come over and i will fight them becau.... *voice fading*