god's good ocean out of sight
By home taping association on March 15, 2026 10:57 pm
not quite happy with the mix - feels muddy to me. wanted the vocals be buried but clear and not sure I quite hit that mark. never mind.
happier with the chord progression than previous weeks though so that makes up for it!
Close your eyes, say goodnight, guess I’ve always been here
Close your eyes, say goodnight, you say I’ve always been here
As the shadows start to give, your tired reflection steals away
Call it quits or call it nothing at all
As you stumble through the day
Your photo kiosk memory recalls
The faded photo by the door
Soundless laughs break the silence on the line
Your voice echoes out of sight
Tracing words through the kaleidoscope of night
Pressure of memory still remains
Callous hands stop the breaking of the waves
Taste of salt rich on my tongue.
Softer now the undertow at bay
God’s good ocean out of sight
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this has a great composition (and I really liked the layering you had going on throughout)