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This needed just a couple more hours, was surfing the deadline so hard I actually went over this time. Thanks for listening!
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What would you have done it you had a couple more hours?
Damn, really good track. Certainly rocking those anime vibes on this one, throw some Japanese vocals over the top of it and it could definitely be the outro track for a show. Also, I really dig the tie in to your track from last week. It was like the prelude to this track in a really cool way . Your string arrangements are excellent.
Wow, loved this. Your piano work really is fantastic.
Especially sweet and inspiring melodies in this one! Doesn't sound like it's wanting for time at all, though I've got no doubt you'd find a way to make it even more incredible with more hours. This week and last got me curious, what're the stories behind the titles?
That violin brought a tear to my eye. Loving those great melodies!
Haha thank you, the violin is such a fun instrument to write for. Thanks for listening as usual
What would you have done it you had a couple more hours?
Layering, leveling, filling in background details, more writing / some rewriting, working out the transitions properly. Hard to describe without writing a full paragraph lol. Cheers for listening!
Damn, really good track. Certainly rocking those anime vibes on this one, throw some Japanese vocals over the top of it and it could definitely be the outro track for a show. Also, I really dig the tie in to your track from last week. It was like the prelude to this track in a really cool way
. Your string arrangements are excellent.
Thank you very much! I definitely get a lot of inspiration from jpop and anime OST.
Wow, loved this. Your piano work really is fantastic.
Thank you!
Especially sweet and inspiring melodies in this one! Doesn't sound like it's wanting for time at all, though I've got no doubt you'd find a way to make it even more incredible with more hours. This week and last got me curious, what're the stories behind the titles?
Thank you so much It's nothing particularly concrete, I've just been on the Sumeria wikipedia train a ton recently. Sometimes I get an almost vertigo-like feeling thinking about the number of generations of people there were before even the Greeks and Romans, all with their own full and interesting lives.
Damn man, this is so cool. Very well produced and arranged. The contrast between all the parts adds so much. The super busy drum beat behind the piano and violin sound awesome together too.
Those drums bump this song to a whole new level. This is next tier man, great fucking job!
Beautiful. The ending progression is so good.
Awesome energy. It really feels like soaring through the air.
Lovely. That melody has me floating. Oooh, now strings, wow! And that build hits huge, from floating to soaring! Nicely done this goes great places
Wow! outstanding effort. Love the strings makes everything so epic.
oh my god so emotional and so energetic at the same time!! beautiful movements here. I'm surprised you think it needs more work but I know it'd be all the better if you say so too
Damn man, this is so cool. Very well produced and arranged. The contrast between all the parts adds so much. The super busy drum beat behind the piano and violin sound awesome together too.
Thanks! That sound is something a dnb artist called Feint was doing in 2011, I've been trying to replicate it the whole time I've been making music lmao. I think I'm finally getting close!
Those drums bump this song to a whole new level. This is next tier man, great fucking job!
Thank you! I was really lucky with how the mix on those drums turned out. Cheers for listening
Beautiful. The ending progression is so good.
Awesome energy. It really feels like soaring through the air.
Lovely. That melody has me floating. Oooh, now strings, wow! And that build hits huge, from floating to soaring! Nicely done this goes great places
Wow! outstanding effort. Love the strings makes everything so epic.
Thanks a lot! Glad you guys enjoyed the strings and the second half, I'm really happy with how this mix ended up. Thanks for listening
oh my god so emotional and so energetic at the same time!! beautiful movements here. I'm surprised you think it needs more work but I know it'd be all the better if you say so too
Thank you! I typed that because of how crazy the deadline rush was this time, but I'm not sure I consider any of my tunes on wb this year 100% finished, although ironically this one is closer than most.
Not much more to add to all the comments above, keep doing what you do, brilliant and emotional stuff, like that timepiece clicking away.
Not much more to add to all the comments above, keep doing what you do, brilliant and emotional stuff, like that timepiece clicking away.
100% agree. Faaaaaantastic piano and strings. You have a real talent for creating beautiful soundscapes. Love the subtle drums that come in at 1:06. Really clever use of that stopwatch ticking too.
I can keep going if you want...there's so much to this. Really nice work on this!!!
Not much more to add to all the comments above, keep doing what you do, brilliant and emotional stuff, like that timepiece clicking away.
Jason Nijjer wrote:Not much more to add to all the comments above, keep doing what you do, brilliant and emotional stuff, like that timepiece clicking away.
100% agree. Faaaaaantastic piano and strings. You have a real talent for creating beautiful soundscapes. Love the subtle drums that come in at 1:06. Really clever use of that stopwatch ticking too.
I can keep going if you want...there's so much to this. Really nice work on this!!!
Thanks guys! I'm really glad you enjoyed this tune, it's a sound I've been trying to get for a while. Cheers for listening
There is nothing more to say. Absolutely Perfect.
There is nothing more to say. Absolutely Perfect.
Thanks so much
That violin brought a tear to my eye. Loving those great melodies!