definitely digging the sounds - glitchy and dark but also upbeat - in terms of CC, I might work a little on the melodies ~75% of the way into the song, but all the leads before and after that section are spot on

definitely digging the sounds - glitchy and dark but also upbeat - in terms of CC, I might work a little on the melodies ~75% of the way into the song, but all the leads before and after that section are spot on ;) <3

thanks nikola! Yea I found it to be some "jumbled" at times during writing, going to slow it down or change it up totally

[quote=nikola]definitely digging the sounds - glitchy and dark but also upbeat - in terms of CC, I might work a little on the melodies ~75% of the way into the song, but all the leads before and after that section are spot on ;) <3[/quote] thanks nikola! Yea I found it to be some "jumbled" at times during writing, going to slow it down or change it up totally

Nice and chunky, though I agree with nikola in terms of CC, I think you should just abandon the melody and go 110% noise + distortion, nothing like a curb stomp finnisher.

Nice and chunky, though I agree with nikola in terms of CC, I think you should just abandon the melody and go 110% noise + distortion, nothing like a curb stomp finnisher.

Killer! Love the driving beat and crunch!

Killer! Love the driving beat and crunch!

The percussion here is excellent: assaultive impact on the kick and toms, nice crunch on snare and hats. I was a bit surprised at the lead voice, I think because I was expecting something darker/more minor in character, from the menacing bass/percussion. (That doesn't mean you should change it, though--just that was my listening experience.)  I did notice that you didn't bring it back in after you'd used it...then again, this isn't a long piece.  But you might want to think of tying it up by reiterating some of the earlier themes. 

In any case, good piece! You could do a lot of different things starting with a strong percussion track like this.

The percussion here is excellent: assaultive impact on the kick and toms, nice crunch on snare and hats. I was a bit surprised at the lead voice, I think because I was expecting something darker/more minor in character, from the menacing bass/percussion. (That doesn't mean you should change it, though--just that was my listening experience.) I did notice that you didn't bring it back in after you'd used it...then again, this isn't a long piece. But you might want to think of tying it up by reiterating some of the earlier themes. In any case, good piece! You could do a lot of different things starting with a strong percussion track like this.

Filthy drum work. Love it. Distinctly you.

Filthy drum work. Love it. Distinctly you.