I like the repeating patterns you used, and the instruments chosen were alright. Next time you might want to vary up the percussion a bit more, add a much louder kick/bass drum and maybe some hi-hats.

I like the repeating patterns you used, and the instruments chosen were alright. Next time you might want to vary up the percussion a bit more, add a much louder kick/bass drum and maybe some hi-hats.

Great start! Got some solid ideas in there!

Great start! Got some solid ideas in there!

Teribble sppelings! a bit too deconstructed for my taste but I do like that Hubbard-like bassline... more of that!

Teribble sppelings! ;) a bit too deconstructed for my taste but I do like that Hubbard-like bassline... more of that!

Missing structure a bit, but good sounds and ideas.

Missing structure a bit, but good sounds and ideas.

Thanks for the comments all.

Thanks for the comments all. :)