I don't know how you adjusted your delay, but you give a quite unique groove and shuffle to the whole track. Really good "bridge" parts, and i think you've impreved your drum programming a lot!

Your singing sounds quite strong here and although I don't get all the literal meaning of the lyrics, they sound really powerful to me.

I don't think you were "swampy" at the least Great track!

BTW as a heavy-usage producer myself, I could advice about using some ping-pong or copy of the repeats in a different stereo position than the original. It adds cohesion to the track, although it complicates things from a guitarrist standpoint, because you have to use the delay as a send effect instead of placing it in series. Maybe you could try it and see if you like the effect, though it could easily overcrowd the mix.

Also the "reverb vocals" are tricky to make, because they tend to use a louder version on the CLEAN voice along with the reverb, so it gains wideness without losing some presence (you always lose "streng" in the middle when using reverb.

Just my two cents in case you want to new mixing tricks. I really liked the song as it was.

I don't know how you adjusted your delay, but you give a quite unique groove and shuffle to the whole track. Really good "bridge" parts, and i think you've impreved your drum programming a lot! Your singing sounds quite strong here and although I don't get all the literal meaning of the lyrics, they sound really powerful to me. I don't think you were "swampy" at the least :) Great track! BTW as a heavy-usage producer myself, I could advice about using some ping-pong or copy of the repeats in a different stereo position than the original. It adds cohesion to the track, although it complicates things from a guitarrist standpoint, because you have to use the delay as a send effect instead of placing it in series. Maybe you could try it and see if you like the effect, though it could easily overcrowd the mix. Also the "reverb vocals" are tricky to make, because they tend to use a louder version on the CLEAN voice along with the reverb, so it gains wideness without losing some presence (you always lose "streng" in the middle when using reverb. Just my two cents in case you want to new mixing tricks. I really liked the song as it was.

The instrumentation is a bit "retired" behind your vocals. You might try putting some of the effects of the master track, so that they pull everything together. As laguna says, just my 2 cents (adjusted for inflation).

The instrumentation is a bit "retired" behind your vocals. You might try putting some of the effects of the master track, so that they pull everything together. As laguna says, just my 2 cents (adjusted for inflation).

I think I set it to delay on 1/8 and just tweaked the other knobs until it sounded good.  There are positives and negatives to not knowing what I'm doing. 

Your singing sounds quite strong here and although I don't get all the literal meaning of the lyrics, they sound really powerful to me.

"Swamped" is a colloquialism that can mean "very busy."

I actually do have most of my effects on separate FX tracks in this song.  I tried various stereo panning things with the guitar delay but I didn't really care for them.  I still suffer from using mostly decent studio headphones because I don't have any studio monitor speakers.  I try to compensate for that by listening through various devices and speakers before I finalize, for what that's worth.  I also suffer from having 47 year old ears and an equally antiquated audio processing unit inside my head.

Thanks for listening and for your suggestion.