Weird - my comment disappeared. I think it was something along the lines of: "Some nice ideas here. If you were to edit it down a bit it would be a nice, tight track."

Weird - my comment disappeared. I think it was something along the lines of: "Some nice ideas here. If you were to edit it down a bit it would be a nice, tight track."

Everyone I showed this song to said about the same thing, but I like its length and beginning repetition. It can be looked as a representation of life. For the first part you do the same things, generally, and add a little bit in every now and again. And then you get to a point were you just suddenly break down, experiment, or change. And after said change, you struggle between your old self, and new self, until you compromise for an in-between. And the rest is golden, until a peaceful ripe old age death.

^^^^^That right there is my excuse xD lol

Everyone I showed this song to said about the same thing, but I like its length and beginning repetition. It can be looked as a representation of life. For the first part you do the same things, generally, and add a little bit in every now and again. And then you get to a point were you just suddenly break down, experiment, or change. And after said change, you struggle between your old self, and new self, until you compromise for an in-between. And the rest is golden, until a peaceful ripe old age death. ^^^^^That right there is my excuse xD lol