I know no one is going to listen to this because of the title, but I need criticism

I know no one is going to listen to this because of the title, but I need criticism :)

More guitar I say!      Esp the rhythm parts.  Prob just a bit on the bassy side?

More guitar I say! :) Esp the rhythm parts. Prob just a bit on the bassy side?

sounds great for a first shot!  you could def put more guitar in there.  perhaps a little louder in the mix and some filtering and/or compression. you could also layer a couple tracks of guitar. the drum part could use some variations thrown in there to liven it up, but other than that, the progression and melodies and stuff are great.  looking forward to hearing more :-D

sounds great for a first shot! you could def put more guitar in there. perhaps a little louder in the mix and some filtering and/or compression. you could also layer a couple tracks of guitar. the drum part could use some variations thrown in there to liven it up, but other than that, the progression and melodies and stuff are great. looking forward to hearing more :-D

2 layers of guitar with slight panning - with different distortion settings.  Some of those rhythms on the DMG are pretty crazy - you layered this from multi takes?  Kick probably needed recording on it's own track by it's self and pushing up in the mix.  Ending is very end of movie-esque :-]

2 layers of guitar with slight panning - with different distortion settings. Some of those rhythms on the DMG are pretty crazy - you layered this from multi takes? Kick probably needed recording on it's own track by it's self and pushing up in the mix. Ending is very end of movie-esque :-]

ACTA is up next to annoy the shit out of everyone

ACTA is up next to annoy the shit out of everyone

Thanks for the recommendations guys.
@cTrix, all is recorded continually, guitar, LSDJ, and all. I never thought about really recording a kick only track and multiple guitar layers. Will do that next guitar track. Oh yeah, one more thing, YOU ARE AMAZING! lol
@spry Understood. More guitar, a bit louder guitar, and a non crappy noise channel. lol

Thanks for the recommendations guys. @cTrix, all is recorded continually, guitar, LSDJ, and all. I never thought about really recording a kick only track and multiple guitar layers. Will do that next guitar track. Oh yeah, one more thing, YOU ARE AMAZING! lol @spry Understood. More guitar, a bit louder guitar, and a non crappy noise channel. lol :)