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The Invasion

By Cosmic Cairns on February 23, 2022 10:36 pm

In my ongoing efforts to spread myself too thin, in addition to Weekly Beats I've also been participating in a couple of writing contests over on Wattpad.  One I just started I have to write a novella by May.  Another one that's been ongoing since late last year is a sci-fi short story contest.  I've managed to make it to the final 8 of that one and now I'm attempting to advance to the final 4.  All of the stories have to adhere to certain prompts and they try to choose some weird stuff and throw you some curveballs.  For instance in the last round the story had to contain a recipe with items and instructions how to prepare it and there also had to be a cat and some sort of mysterious object like the monoliths in 2001 or something like that.  For the current round, in addition to a story, I'm also required to write a poem.  It has to be a sci-fi theme and it has to utilize the word "crepuscular," which was a new one to me.  I had to look it up.  It means related to twilight. 

So anyway, I figured since I had to write a poem, why not kill two birds with one stone.  There are some ready-to-go lyrics here, why not set them to music and make a Weekly Beats track out of it?  This could end up being a secret weapon for me that gives me an edge.  I'd bet none of the other competitors are going to set their poems to music.  But on the other hand, maybe it'll be too showboaty or something and I'll get eliminated.  Or maybe the song will suck.  I don't know.  It's a risk, but I'm going for it.  If I get knocked out, that's okay.  It's all for fun anyway.

Just as a side note, I wrote the poem and titled it "The Invasion" last week, in reference to an alien invasion.  This was before all the major world events took place this week.  I'm not trying to be flippant about the situation in the Ukraine. 

Since it's supposed to have a sci-fi feel I prominently used my musical saw and some cool sounds on the microkorg.  Here's the poem/lyrics:

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It was twilight when the spaceships came
In the crepuscular light I saw their flames
As they touched down on our fragile world

I was frightened as could be
I ran to hide beneath a tree
As lit up walkways from their crafts unfurled

Out they came in groups of threes
They looked like horses crossed with bees
And then I heard their voices in my mind

"Could you tell us where we might be?
We took a wrong turn at Albuquerque
Our navs are down and so we're flying blind."

I gulped as I tried to keep my cool
But I failed geography in school
You'd think I'd at least know where I was
But I just chugged eight beers and I was buzzed

I thought my phone might have an app
That could give them an accurate map
But it seemed my battery was dead

Underneath the rising moon
They poked around my mind and soon
Discovered nothing useful in my head

They took off in a blast of light
And left me in the darkening night
Alone, confused, and wondering what was real

And though I had some lingering fear
I shrugged it off and chugged more beer
And that's why, Mom, I'm late for the evening meal

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I'm impressed you've been able to spread yourself over so many creative projects. Best of luck with the novella and the short story competitions! I've been trying to write a novel since last year and know it's not easy work.

I really like the poem, it made me laugh, and I think you built a great atmosphere around it in the way you approached it as a song.

that was fun. the lyrics are cool and the space effects in the track are sublime. a great song, my friend.

I love the saw sound. Storytelling is pretty cool.

hent03 wrote:

I'm impressed you've been able to spread yourself over so many creative projects. Best of luck with the novella and the short story competitions! I've been trying to write a novel since last year and know it's not easy work.

I really like the poem, it made me laugh, and I think you built a great atmosphere around it in the way you approached it as a song.

Thanks!  I've actually written 3 novel-length works and am pretty far into a 4th.  I enjoy it and it's satisfying, but it's without a doubt among the hardest things I've ever done.  I will say it was fun to adapt a poem to a song.  It made for kind of a different approach to songwriting than I'm used to, but I may have to try it again. 



Q-Rosh wrote:

that was fun. the lyrics are cool and the space effects in the track are sublime. a great song, my friend.

Thanks!  It never takes much to convince me to go with a space theme, so the poem seemed ready made to me to adapt to a song.



djippy wrote:

I love the saw sound. Storytelling is pretty cool.

Thanks!  I knew I wanted to use the saw on this, since it has such a great sci-fi feel to it.

I dig the bass and singing saw/theremin sounds. Beautiful loose timing and evocative lyrics, great work. Best of luck with your many projects on the boil!

It's a shoe in with this song, really

always nice to hear that saw & it's great that you went for it!!! hope all went wall!

Nice word: crepuscular! I want to read your fiction for sure. This song is fun story. The saw is perfect. This is pretty epic. lol, I'm chuckling through this. Nice.

That groove starts off the track really nicely. Wattpad is something I learned about when my writing mentor joined it and shared it with her classes. It's a great resource for writing. Congratulations on reaching the top 8!

Autovessel wrote:

I dig the bass and singing saw/theremin sounds. Beautiful loose timing and evocative lyrics, great work. Best of luck with your many projects on the boil!

Thanks!  I'm probably going to need that luck.



Devieus wrote:

It's a shoe in with this song, really

The song and the bribe I paid the judges will hopefully see me through.  smile



emily wrote:

always nice to hear that saw & it's great that you went for it!!! hope all went wall!

Thanks!  The saw will certainly rear its head again before the year is over.  All's good so far.  Got everything submitted but am still awaiting results.



miraclemiles wrote:

Nice word: crepuscular! I want to read your fiction for sure. This song is fun story. The saw is perfect. This is pretty epic. lol, I'm chuckling through this. Nice.

Yeah, I don't think I've ever heard that word before, but I like it.  Might have to start dropping it into conversations.  If you ever do get the inkling to read any of my fiction I've got a bunch of it posted on Wattpad.  I'm known as Wuckster over there. 



Anon_Buster wrote:

That groove starts off the track really nicely. Wattpad is something I learned about when my writing mentor joined it and shared it with her classes. It's a great resource for writing. Congratulations on reaching the top 8!

Thanks!  I discovered Wattpad back around 2013 I think, and it really is a nice resource.  I posted my first book on there and I actually got a bunch of people I've never met to read it, which was much cooler than having it just gather dust in a drawer somewhere.  It's also inspired me to write more, which is great.

I have mixed feelings about the big words. Sometimes when people drop them I find it elitist, but it's always impressive. I'm going to look for Wuckster on Wattpad then!

miraclemiles wrote:

I have mixed feelings about the big words. Sometimes when people drop them I find it elitist, but it's always impressive. I'm going to look for Wuckster on Wattpad then!

Yeah I hear ya on the ten dollar words.  I usually find you can get the same point across much easier and people will understand you more if you just use simpler words.  I took a lot of writing courses in college and there were always those pretentious guys who had to use big words all the time.  I remember this one guy in particular was just notorious for it.  My friends and I would always make fun of him... "The perspicaciousness of the narrator's ontological fixations are like a chrysalis for his mendacity."  It was pretty ridiculous.  But a well-placed big word at just the right time can be cool.   

this is great, i'm actually going to steal "crepuscular light" for a future song, thank you.

congrats on top 8!  good luck!

CosmicCairns wrote:

In my ongoing efforts to spread myself too thin

greetings, fellow overachievers!

orangedrink wrote:

this is great, i'm actually going to steal "crepuscular light" for a future song, thank you.

congrats on top 8!  good luck!

CosmicCairns wrote:

In my ongoing efforts to spread myself too thin

greetings, fellow overachievers!

Feel free to use it!  I'm happy to join the overachievers club, but maybe it should be renamed the crazy people's club.  smile

Wow that drum beat, it has a great sound and character. The theremin is a very tasteful addition! It does take us to the vintage movies with extraterrestrial beings draped in aluminum, as if they were ready to go straight into the oven, along with some onions and carrots. This track has a nice poppy and light feel about, it brought a smile! smile

I really enjoyed the narrative poem. Matches up well with the music which enhances the storytelling.  You're jamming the musical saw like a hillbilly theremin! Hope you'll consider submitting this and other Sci-Fi inspired music to the Brooklyn SciFi Film Festival https://brooklynscififilmfest.com/music-submission for our Oct 2022 festival. Good luck with the writing contests and novella!

Excellent saw! Fits in so nicely with your vocals and the guitars. Nice work!

Kedbreak136 wrote:

Wow that drum beat, it has a great sound and character. The theremin is a very tasteful addition! It does take us to the vintage movies with extraterrestrial beings draped in aluminum, as if they were ready to go straight into the oven, along with some onions and carrots. This track has a nice poppy and light feel about, it brought a smile! smile

Thanks!  I tried to have some fun with this one.



NWSPR wrote:

I really enjoyed the narrative poem. Matches up well with the music which enhances the storytelling.  You're jamming the musical saw like a hillbilly theremin! Hope you'll consider submitting this and other Sci-Fi inspired music to the Brooklyn SciFi Film Festival https://brooklynscififilmfest.com/music-submission for our Oct 2022 festival. Good luck with the writing contests and novella!

Thanks!  I'll submit this one for sure and maybe some others assuming I do some other sci-fi themed music this year.



Tone Matrix wrote:

Excellent saw! Fits in so nicely with your vocals and the guitars. Nice work!

Thanks!  This was a great opportunity to include the saw.

Oh man, this is excellent. What a great melody and the lyrics are so good. This is my 3rd time here! I'ma download it smile

cfurrow wrote:

Oh man, this is excellent. What a great melody and the lyrics are so good. This is my 3rd time here! I'ma download it smile

Awesome.  Glad to hear you dug this one.

CosmicCairns wrote:
miraclemiles wrote:

I have mixed feelings about the big words. Sometimes when people drop them I find it elitist, but it's always impressive. I'm going to look for Wuckster on Wattpad then!

Yeah I hear ya on the ten dollar words.  I usually find you can get the same point across much easier and people will understand you more if you just use simpler words.  I took a lot of writing courses in college and there were always those pretentious guys who had to use big words all the time.  I remember this one guy in particular was just notorious for it.  My friends and I would always make fun of him... "The perspicaciousness of the narrator's ontological fixations are like a chrysalis for his mendacity."  It was pretty ridiculous.  But a well-placed big word at just the right time can be cool.

ha, that sentence is over the top! Agree a well places one is powerful

Such a cool song, love this one.  Great melody and lyrics.

Chrisfoo wrote:

Such a cool song, love this one.  Great melody and lyrics.

This one was fun to do.  Glad to hear you liked it.

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