Nice mastering, I see the evolution since last week. Also I like the fast bass parts and then the bass alone at the end. Adds a good vibe to it

Keep it up, the efforts are paying off

Nice mastering, I see the evolution since last week. Also I like the fast bass parts and then the bass alone at the end. Adds a good vibe to it :D Keep it up, the efforts are paying off

I think you could benefit most from some work on mix. The main guitar is overwhelming, even drums or secondary guitar. It's easy for me to say, doing that is way different. Drums, bass, guitars (and vocal) is something I did once or twice and is still a mystery for me tbh. One thing I learned over the years is that distorted guitar takes a lot of high frequencies.

Having said all that - cool submission, solid track

I think you could benefit most from some work on mix. The main guitar is overwhelming, even drums or secondary guitar. It's easy for me to say, doing that is way different. Drums, bass, guitars (and vocal) is something I did once or twice and is still a mystery for me tbh. One thing I learned over the years is that distorted guitar takes a lot of high frequencies. Having said all that - cool submission, solid track :D

Merci Monsieur!

Thanks! Yeah, that's true
There is also a genre-specific thing in that I was aiming for a guitar sound that would be closer to the white noise. I think something like what starts from 2:00.

I also need to return to the practice of listening on speakers when mixing, not studio monitors, but I think it helps by giving a better space/scene representation than headphones

[quote=LeCroqueMonsieur]Nice mastering, I see the evolution since last week. Also I like the fast bass parts and then the bass alone at the end. Adds a good vibe to it :D Keep it up, the efforts are paying off[/quote] Merci Monsieur! :) [quote=dreat]I think you could benefit most from some work on mix. The main guitar is overwhelming, even drums or secondary guitar. It's easy for me to say, doing that is way different. Drums, bass, guitars (and vocal) is something I did once or twice and is still a mystery for me tbh. One thing I learned over the years is that distorted guitar takes a lot of high frequencies. Having said all that - cool submission, solid track :D[/quote] Thanks! Yeah, that's true There is also a genre-specific thing in that I was aiming for a guitar sound that would be closer to the white noise. I think something like what starts from 2:00. I also need to return to the practice of listening on speakers when mixing, not studio monitors, but I think it helps by giving a better space/scene representation than headphones