I like this--excellent first beat.  It's great to hang everything off the hook you state with the first beat. I *might* suggest trying a few additional melodic elements in there, but that's entirely optional, and only if you think the piece needs more of something.  Nice work.

I like this--excellent first beat. It's great to hang everything off the hook you state with the first beat. I *might* suggest trying a few additional melodic elements in there, but that's entirely optional, and only if you think the piece needs more of something. Nice work.

I concur with onezero -- I thought this was really solid, ESPECIALLY for your first beat.  if you hadn't said it was "not very well timed" I would have just thought that was intentional (and liked it)

I concur with onezero -- I thought this was really solid, ESPECIALLY for your first beat. if you hadn't said it was "not very well timed" I would have just thought that was intentional (and liked it)

I like your kick a lot.  It's like pure bass (or something I don't even know lol)

I like your kick a lot. It's like pure bass (or something I don't even know lol)

The SPC is just a sketch pad, no sequencer so my timing is off with breaks and drops and such. Caustic is approaching a proppa DAW but I only have so much time and I'd prefer to spend it getting up to speed with Abelton. I do like my kicks PWR, and all of your comments are duely noted. Look for rapid improvement in the weeks to come.

The SPC is just a sketch pad, no sequencer so my timing is off with breaks and drops and such. Caustic is approaching a proppa DAW but I only have so much time and I'd prefer to spend it getting up to speed with Abelton. I do like my kicks PWR, and all of your comments are duely noted. Look for rapid improvement in the weeks to come.