Sorry about the thumb, hope that heals up soon! As far as the track goes I enjoyed it. I like the calm somber ambience in the first two thirds, and I really enjoyed that change in tone around 2:36. I like the bass synths at the end as well. I know you said the song wasn't finished but what you have so far I dug.

Sorry about the thumb, hope that heals up soon! As far as the track goes I enjoyed it. I like the calm somber ambience in the first two thirds, and I really enjoyed that change in tone around 2:36. I like the bass synths at the end as well. I know you said the song wasn't finished but what you have so far I dug.

Best wishes for your personal thumb drama. This dreamy and beautiful track, going into a more dramatic scenery, I like very much and I give it my thumb up.

Best wishes for your personal thumb drama. This dreamy and beautiful track, going into a more dramatic scenery, I like very much and I give it my thumb up.

Bummer you hurt your thumb, hope it heals up well.

There's a restrained and reflective melancholy to this piece as it gets moving at the beginning. I like how it opens up after a minute or so. Didn't expect that huge smeary wipeout bass at 2:30ish, menacing and powerful, taking the piece to a bleak and beautiful conclusion.

Bummer you hurt your thumb, hope it heals up well. There's a restrained and reflective melancholy to this piece as it gets moving at the beginning. I like how it opens up after a minute or so. Didn't expect that huge smeary wipeout bass at 2:30ish, menacing and powerful, taking the piece to a bleak and beautiful conclusion.

every sound here, like soft glimmers of moonlight, makes me feel so calm, yet constantly curious for more(and then to hear it surge in the second half, arrives with perfect timing).
this track is sooooo gorgeous!

every sound here, like soft glimmers of moonlight, makes me feel so calm, yet constantly curious for more(and then to hear it surge in the second half, arrives with perfect timing). this track is sooooo gorgeous! <3

I am on  a train riding through the country side, dressed in a suit staring straight ahead. As the train approaches the city the sky darkens. When the train pulls up to the station you see the car is full and everyone is staring straight ahead. The train stops the door opens and …

Very nice.

I am on a train riding through the country side, dressed in a suit staring straight ahead. As the train approaches the city the sky darkens. When the train pulls up to the station you see the car is full and everyone is staring straight ahead. The train stops the door opens and … Very nice.

That sounds like a rather unpleasant experience. I hope you get a fast and clean heal of the thumb. Somber tone but beautiful sounds that emerge quietly. I like these harsher synth attacks, like a bright light that suddenly illuminate the light, and it seems the night responds with the percussive sound. That is pretty cool!

That sounds like a rather unpleasant experience. I hope you get a fast and clean heal of the thumb. Somber tone but beautiful sounds that emerge quietly. I like these harsher synth attacks, like a bright light that suddenly illuminate the light, and it seems the night responds with the percussive sound. That is pretty cool!

Ah, that sucks.  Hope you are doing better and on the mend. The track is lovely, and works so hard to discern that it is incomplete. Very well done.

Ah, that sucks. Hope you are doing better and on the mend. The track is lovely, and works so hard to discern that it is incomplete. Very well done.

Those bass stabs are incredible.  Sorry for double submit. I got a little antsy on the old clicker. But the synth stabs have to be acknowledged

Those bass stabs are incredible. Sorry for double submit. I got a little antsy on the old clicker. But the synth stabs have to be acknowledged :)

thank you very much. it's just a feeling I have, there's all the ingredients here but I maybe later on I will go back and edit a lot of little things that bug me

[quote=Saguaro Gigante]Sorry about the thumb, hope that heals up soon! As far as the track goes I enjoyed it. I like the calm somber ambience in the first two thirds, and I really enjoyed that change in tone around 2:36. I like the bass synths at the end as well. I know you said the song wasn't finished but what you have so far I dug.[/quote] thank you very much. it's just a feeling I have, there's all the ingredients here but I maybe later on I will go back and edit a lot of little things that bug me

thank you, I am healing and it's nothing bad thankfully I just have to be extra careful grabbing things for a while

[quote=Q-Rosh]Best wishes for your personal thumb drama. This dreamy and beautiful track, going into a more dramatic scenery, I like very much and I give it my thumb up.[/quote] thank you, I am healing and it's nothing bad thankfully I just have to be extra careful grabbing things for a while

Simple is better, great vibes. Tbh def a fav.

Simple is better, great vibes. Tbh def a fav.

ah no worries, really appreciate the comments, I'm doing much better now thanks!

[quote=NWSPR]Those bass stabs are incredible. Sorry for double submit. I got a little antsy on the old clicker. But the synth stabs have to be acknowledged :)[/quote] ah no worries, really appreciate the comments, I'm doing much better now thanks!

Thanks a lot, for the comment and the well wishes, I am indeed doing much better

[quote=Kedbreak136]That sounds like a rather unpleasant experience. I hope you get a fast and clean heal of the thumb. Somber tone but beautiful sounds that emerge quietly. I like these harsher synth attacks, like a bright light that suddenly illuminate the light, and it seems the night responds with the percussive sound. That is pretty cool![/quote] Thanks a lot, for the comment and the well wishes, I am indeed doing much better

thanks for this, this reads as the beginning of a very interesting story! I wanna know more

[quote=mzunguko]I am on a train riding through the country side, dressed in a suit staring straight ahead. As the train approaches the city the sky darkens. When the train pulls up to the station you see the car is full and everyone is staring straight ahead. The train stops the door opens and … Very nice.[/quote] thanks for this, this reads as the beginning of a very interesting story! I wanna know more

thank you, I am doing much better now! I honestly was very conflicted about including that part at the end, I kind of stumbled into that bass sound and I liked how it sounded, but it only sounded good super loud

[quote=Autovessel]Bummer you hurt your thumb, hope it heals up well. There's a restrained and reflective melancholy to this piece as it gets moving at the beginning. I like how it opens up after a minute or so. Didn't expect that huge smeary wipeout bass at 2:30ish, menacing and powerful, taking the piece to a bleak and beautiful conclusion.[/quote] thank you, I am doing much better now! I honestly was very conflicted about including that part at the end, I kind of stumbled into that bass sound and I liked how it sounded, but it only sounded good super loud