I think it needs a bit less straight-ahead repetition of the ideas to function in the way you've described. It's a good piece, just needs a little tweaking. Perhaps a nice strong melody to come out of those arpeggios?

I think it needs a bit less straight-ahead repetition of the ideas to function in the way you've described. It's a good piece, just needs a little tweaking. Perhaps a nice strong melody to come out of those arpeggios?

Sits nicely in he background.  Bit crunch in middle pretty crazy.  As vinpous says... feels like it could take a break from the main appeg.  If this were a game you'd be "aarhg" after 20 mins :-P    (although if it were end music I guess it'd be fine)

Sits nicely in he background. Bit crunch in middle pretty crazy. As vinpous says... feels like it could take a break from the main appeg. If this were a game you'd be "aarhg" after 20 mins :-P (although if it were end music I guess it'd be fine)

Thanks for the comments! Yes I think you're right it gets too repetitive and I'm sad I couldn't come up with that strong melody. It's purpose its indeed to sit on the background but no to last 20 minutes. It's more about supporting a cut-scene sequence. If I ever have the time to refine it, I'll probably try to make something out of the piano arpeggio at the end.

Thanks for the comments! Yes I think you're right it gets too repetitive and I'm sad I couldn't come up with that strong melody. It's purpose its indeed to sit on the background but no to last 20 minutes. It's more about supporting a cut-scene sequence. If I ever have the time to refine it, I'll probably try to make something out of the piano arpeggio at the end.

nice incidental! indeed.

nice incidental! indeed.