The composition seems very good. The guitar sounds like it is behind a door though. The vocals sound much better once you start singing louder/yelling. There is much more emotion in that. I have to say, props for live recording though, It's not something I have ever done even close to this successful, so keep at it man. Sorry If I sound rude, I am only aiming to help

The composition seems very good. The guitar sounds like it is behind a door though. The vocals sound much better once you start singing louder/yelling. There is much more emotion in that. I have to say, props for live recording though, It's not something I have ever done even close to this successful, so keep at it man. Sorry If I sound rude, I am only aiming to help =)

Yeah this is some good power pop -- get your production together so we can hear your ideas better.

Yeah this is some good power pop -- get your production together so we can hear your ideas better.

Catchy! I agree about the guitar--it sounds like it's in another room or something. How did you record it?

Catchy! I agree about the guitar--it sounds like it's in another room or something. How did you record it?

Yes, production is the biggest thing needing improving here.

Yes, production is the biggest thing needing improving here.

i just imagine the track recorded a bit better and i instantly love it.

i just imagine the track recorded a bit better and i instantly love it.

Thanks guys! That feed back gives me more insight in my ideas. Hopefully I can improve over the course of this year.

Thanks guys! That feed back gives me more insight in my ideas. Hopefully I can improve over the course of this year.