When it gets going its really cool, the gliding synth lead section is really nice and atmospheric too. My only criticism would be to maybe nix the first two bars at the beginning and two more bars before everything kicks in at 0:30 for the sake of jumping into things a little quicker. Unless, since its a work in progress, you planned on developing that section more.

But hey, this is coming from me, a guy who frequently wears out a riff long after it stopped being interesting haha.

When it gets going its really cool, the gliding synth lead section is really nice and atmospheric too. My only criticism would be to maybe nix the first two bars at the beginning and two more bars before everything kicks in at 0:30 for the sake of jumping into things a little quicker. Unless, since its a work in progress, you planned on developing that section more. But hey, this is coming from me, a guy who frequently wears out a riff long after it stopped being interesting haha.

I love collaborations, good going!! I guess my only critique is that it faded out too soon/ the fade-out was too long. Thank you

I love collaborations, good going!! I guess my only critique is that it faded out too soon/ the fade-out was too long. Thank you

There's stuff going on in the outro you can easily put in other places, possibly the intro.

There's stuff going on in the outro you can easily put in other places, possibly the intro.