This one's improved a lot, specially from last week. I could say that maybe you could lower the fuzz version a little bit more, so maybe 20% of the clean voice plus the FX one 10% less volume with more reverb(or any ambience treatment you give it). Anyway, track's quite more finished and polished, definetely.

Feeling some FKA Twigs influence here. Am I wrong?

And please, don't end so abruptly. Your track, musically, was really dope and it breaks the magic!

Really good work

This one's improved a lot, specially from last week. I could say that maybe you could lower the fuzz version a little bit more, so maybe 20% of the clean voice plus the FX one 10% less volume with more reverb(or any ambience treatment you give it). Anyway, track's quite more finished and polished, definetely. Feeling some FKA Twigs influence here. Am I wrong? And please, don't end so abruptly. Your track, musically, was really dope and it breaks the magic! Really good work

Voice seems a little out of sync with the backing (don't know what DAW or other you're using). I agree with laguna about the abruptness of the ending. Otherwise, really well done

Voice seems a little out of sync with the backing (don't know what DAW or other you're using). I agree with laguna about the abruptness of the ending. Otherwise, really well done

I like the fuzz... and the track.

I like the fuzz... and the track.

Lots of potential in this. I would drop the vox a little in the mix, they seem to overpower everything... even though they are great, they are swallowing the rest of the track. The backing vocal stabs are perfect!

It's really hard to pump out a fully produced song in a week, so I understand the abrupt ending. But keep it up!!

Lots of potential in this. I would drop the vox a little in the mix, they seem to overpower everything... even though they are great, they are swallowing the rest of the track. The backing vocal stabs are perfect! It's really hard to pump out a fully produced song in a week, so I understand the abrupt ending. But keep it up!!

it's somehow relaxing, comfortive and just nice to listen to.

it's somehow relaxing, comfortive and just nice to listen to.

Hey, sorry for such a late response and thank u for your comment :} i do like FKA Twigs, and that makes me feel really nice haha. I definitely agree about the vocals now hearing this a week later. In the moment they didn't seem so overpowering, but I get what you're saying. I also agree on the ending and I'm trying to kind of figure that out for tomorrow... Again, thanks Laguna you are such a helpful lil cat.

[quote=laguna]This one's improved a lot, specially from last week. I could say that maybe you could lower the fuzz version a little bit more, so maybe 20% of the clean voice plus the FX one 10% less volume with more reverb(or any ambience treatment you give it). Anyway, track's quite more finished and polished, definetely. Feeling some FKA Twigs influence here. Am I wrong? And please, don't end so abruptly. Your track, musically, was really dope and it breaks the magic! Really good work[/quote] Hey, sorry for such a late response and thank u for your comment :} i do like FKA Twigs, and that makes me feel really nice haha. I definitely agree about the vocals now hearing this a week later. In the moment they didn't seem so overpowering, but I get what you're saying. I also agree on the ending and I'm trying to kind of figure that out for tomorrow... Again, thanks Laguna you are such a helpful lil cat. :p

Thank you:')

[quote=filby]Lots of potential in this. I would drop the vox a little in the mix, they seem to overpower everything... even though they are great, they are swallowing the rest of the track. The backing vocal stabs are perfect! It's really hard to pump out a fully produced song in a week, so I understand the abrupt ending. But keep it up!![/quote] Thank you:')